The main story in Part B that interested me was "The Tale of King Rhampsinitus". "The Two Brothers" was somewhat interesting, but it was also quite lengthy, and I fear I would struggle to do that story justice in a very short format.
"The Tale of King Rhampsinitus" is a very solid story overall, I don't really have many gripes about it. The only thing in particular that comes to mind that might be worth changing would be to help out the slain brother a bit, either giving him a great burial or a resurrection in some form, since the living brother gained so much out of the entire ordeal, and because of how noble the dead brother's sacrifice was.
Image Source: Ruins of an Egyptian Temple, taken by DEZALB
Story Source: "The Tale of King Rhampsinitus" by Donald Mackenzie
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